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Blackshamrock.
Beiträge: 3
Wohnort: IRELAND
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Titel: Rise of the Irish Rangers Mercenary guild.
Verfasst am: 15.01.09 16:05
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Black Shamrock was a loner. He had been a Military pilot for the Rhineland Military in the nomad war, he was one of the best pilots in a squadron know as The Rhineland Ice Wolves fighter Division. Little was Know of them, they where keep a secret and any data files or any information at all on them was deemed above classified. But they where a lot of rumors and stories flowing true the ranks of the Rhineland Military about these so called aleet pilots.
Black shamrock was a man of tall starchier. He was about 6feet tall wade about 300 pounds and was well built and quite Good Looking chap. He stood out in a crowd, was a bit of a party animal and quite the Ladies man. He had blue eyes and blond hair, he wore a tight military stile hair cut and had scars all over his head and one distinct scar down the left side of his face and he always wore a black uniform and black boots as well as a Rhineland pistol on his left leg and he had a bit of a rep for being a bit of a scraper. You new when you spoke to this guy that he had been round and you new not to cross this guy at all for fear that he would kill you.
He started his civilian flying carrier by picking a couple of fights with exinos and some drug dealing.
But this wasn't his stile trying to make ends meet, picking up the odd job here and there doing the odd bit of dodgy business. He wanted more and he new what he wanted and what he was capable of.
This guy was going to make a name for him self and he new exactly how he was going to do it.
P.S. This is my first time trying to make a car and give him a past as well as get in to role play so please be gentle with me and constructive criticism is always welcome thank you. |
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beejay
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Playtime: 1163h
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Wohnort: Meerbusch
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Verfasst am: 15.01.09 18:10
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Hi Shamrock,
although I am not yet sure whether I tend to like or dis-like your 'gentle-but-aggressive' type of Mr.-Black-Shamrock-guy, but it is at least a good start for the resume of an interesting RPG character, so if you know more about the career of Mr. Black Shamrock, please share it with us
Cheers
beejay
PS: sorry for asking, I am just curious: to me it seems that your text contains quite a lot of misspellings (e.g. 'where' vs. 'were', 'new' vs. 'knew'), for someone who lives in Ireland, so what's your excuse for that ? |
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Blackshamrock.
Beiträge: 3
Wohnort: IRELAND
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Verfasst am: 15.01.09 20:11
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My spell check wasn't working properly lol. And I'm some what dyslexic.
Its not a bad thing I just have tendency to mix up letters.
Thank you for the comment. I don't know where I'm going to go with MR Shamrock at the Moe what is written above is a template. |
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